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Hmmm. 🤔 That is a bit of a problem. Have you ever watched the movie Emperor? The ending of it was a twist. Perhaps you could watch it and get an idea of how the ending should be.

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Hi there. I've been trying to for quite some time, but I think I kinda wrote myself into some sort of writers block. I have been aiming for a more rewarding ending though.

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Do you think of ever going back into it?

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I am indeed German.
The #JeSuisParis hashtag was included in the sub-header because I finished up on that chapter literally as the attacks occurred, so I felt some brief tribute was appropriate. The Fraternité, on the other hand, I had written entirely by chance. Some concepts are universally relevant, I suppose.
Anyway, I'm glad you know enough German to know what "Bei Fuß" means.

I know Im late as fuck, and that you probably won't care. But I really, really like Chrysalis visit the Hague story, Im not finished yet, but I have to point out the fact it's really well written, realist and believable the main characters are likeable, and are well developped and actually progresse (like Estermann bearing the Ponies more and more, chrysalis being more cooperative over time etc...) . I love the german interjection from Estermann, I take it that you are actually german ? I know Im YEARS late, but as a French, the #JeSuisParis hit a sensible chord, I don't know if the emphasize on "fraternité" was related, if yes nice one ! Anyway, Im off to read one more chapter. I don't know if you'll recieve any notification or anything, but I really like your work ! (I have to admit that I laughed incontrolably when Estermann told Lyra to come "Bei Fuß" xD)