• Member Since 29th Aug, 2012
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Cyrus Sky Blazer


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NP Duelist96, I'm enjoying Fleeting flames and find the story to have an interesting take on the dynamics between Fleetfoot and Mark right now, especially in the last chapter you typed thus far. I'm also looking forward to what Mark and Spitfire will also endure with each other.

Keep doing your best good sir. After all, the well written word wills the wisdom of the wise upon the weary, and makes the parts written in passion and desire more understandable and worth-while.

P.S. Just also don't over-exert yourself both in writing and life. Balance is key.

Thanks for the fav.:twilightsmile:

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Of course and thank you for efforts.
and as long as you keep seeking to do your best you'll continue to excel in all things you do.

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Oh wow, thank you so much for the feedback! Glad to see you're enjoying the story so much. Means a lot to me that my effort into making quality writing of a sort isn't entirely wasted :yay:

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First off it was my pleasure in reading and enjoying your story "A Week In Ponyville" EXOLIEF!

As for what was the reason for my adding it to my favorites well i'll mention a few of the reasons so as to not overwhelm you with too many.

for starters i found how Marcus being set up in twilight's home and being "Used" so to speak without bad intentions on her part..but i found it humorous mainly because of the theme of "experimental curiosity"..

Second how he felt and still feels about rarity is a truly heartfelt situation...in both the rise of their feelings in the halfway point in Day 1 and the quick fall due to him feeling awkward and wrong for acting on those feelings..to marcus being yelled at by rarity in "Secrets / Day 3"...and reconnecting in "Day 4"...these are understandable reasons..and feelings in any relationship especially if marcus being the only human involved in this story and sharing feelings and a bed with rarity..something a human being would be ostracized greatly for..

lastly the coming to terms with his situation is unfolding properly..and how much time and effort you placed in trying to make the reader feel his inclusion in all things surrounding him...but also his feelings about being the only human there..

there is plenty i can and would add given anytime should it be needed...but as far as i can tell you are doing very well with this story.

i applaud your efforts and wish you the best as you continue your work.

all i can ask is that you give yourself time to rest..and enjoy all you've done..as others have.

oh and your story was the first i read before becoming a member so i never forgot about it.

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