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Cloudy writes stories. Cloudy likes it when ponies like each other maybe a little too much and sometimes end up in love. Cloudy writes stories about these things, often.

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  • T Taken for Granite

    Ask Applejack, and she'll tell you Pinkie Pie can be a few apples short of a bushel. They've always been good friends, but what could they possibly have in common? Turns out there is an answer to that question.  · Cloudy Skies
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  • E Twice as Bright

    Celestia likes her routine. Tax reforms, grants, laws and construction projects are all a princess needs to be content. It's just her luck that for Pinkie Pie, "content" is not nearly enough.  · Cloudy Skies
    52,160 words · 14,348 views  ·  1,470  ·  23
  • E Where They Are Joined

    At long last, the wedding bells ring for Applejack and Fluttershy. Everypony does their utmost to try to make it the best wedding ever, but as the pair discovers, it quickly becomes a question of getting married despite, rather than because of this.  · Cloudy Skies
    35,650 words · 3,861 views  ·  340  ·  10
  • E No Recipe For Perfection

    Rarity struggles to overcome an art block. It takes a very special pony to show Rarity who she is.  · Cloudy Skies
    22,156 words · 6,537 views  ·  717  ·  9
  • E Well Grounded

    Applejack tells stories, teaches Apple Bloom a lesson about what it means to be an earth pony  · Cloudy Skies
    5,842 words · 6,832 views  ·  559  ·  14
  • E Lost and Found

    AJ and FS are lost, trying to get home. Meanwhile Dash struggles to understand what FS means to her.  · Cloudy Skies
    168,377 words · 8,987 views  ·  849  ·  17
  • E Pinkie Pie's Hero

    Dash and Pinkie dress up as superheroes and head out to have fun together, but Pinkie has a secret.  · Cloudy Skies
    8,176 words · 11,381 views  ·  859  ·  26
  • E Where Your Heart Is

    Rainbow Dash begins to question where she truly belongs.  · Cloudy Skies
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  • T Within and Without

    Luna takes the Elements of Harmony on a journey in more ways than one.  · Cloudy Skies
    154,174 words · 12,473 views  ·  1,263  ·  22
  • E Where Earth Meets Sky

    Rainbow Dash suspects Applejack is stealing her oldest friend from her. Is it really that simple?  · Cloudy Skies
    40,301 words · 13,409 views  ·  845  ·  18

Chapter Twelve · 9:14pm

Twilight, as was fast becoming a habit, lay wide awake for a little longer. She stared up past the rafters to the ceiling of the mill, thinking about nothing at all until Luna approached Twilight and leaned close. Her horn was softly glowing, the princess intending to shut the purple unicorn out from her dream.

"You're going to keep doing this for how long?" Twilight whispered, halting Luna in her tracks. The princess looked honestly surprised at the question. Twilight gazed up at her, lying on her back.

"And why wouldn't you meet my eyes that night at the banquet, back at the fort?" Twilight asked. She had so many questions she had never known when or how to ask. They chose now to escape her brain through her mouth.

The princess said nothing for the longest time, their eyes fastened on each other, violet on blue, neither part so much as blinking. Luna's horn was still glowing, pulsing without a sound. The light illuminated both their faces, neither of which held any discernible expression.

"When you said there was merit to anypony who dared to speak their mind to you rather than bow and scrape," Twilight said, shaking her head slowly. The back of her head ground against the hard floor. "I thought at first it was an insult to Rarity, but there's a difference between obeisance and observing decorum. I'm asking you the questions. Why won't you answer? Why won't you show me?"

Luna was still staring at her. The princess was mute, but she leaned in a little closer. Her breath was hot. Twilight blinked, only now realizing that there were tears in her own eyes, and she was shivering even though she felt warm all over. Her body obviously didn't even know what it was doing any more.

The final word in their discussion still hung above Twilight, the spell that clung to Luna’s horn in silent threat. Despite how much she didn’t want that spell cast on her, Twilight felt herself drawn up, raising her head off the ground to get closer to Luna. Her breath came ragged, and her voice was unsteady.

"If your duty and your purpose is to raise the moon, and the memory you cling to is what's keeping you from doing that," Twilight said, gripped by a surge of the nauseating anger that accompanied thinking about the dichotomy that was Luna. "Why can't you let it go? What the hay am I missing?"

(Excerpt from Within and Without, Chapter 12. I wrote this in 2011 and used a lot of passive voice back then, but eh. Formatting is also strange. I've written a lot and learned a lot since then, but the story will forever be precious to me.)

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#126 · 17w, 2d ago · · ·

>>2349438 just the announcement was a pick-me-up! Take your time, I can wait!

#125 · 17w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2343241 That is one damn heavy burden to bear (and far too ambitious a timeline). Can I instead contribute to making 2017 a tiny bit better?

#124 · 18w, 6d ago · · ·

Well, Cloudy, this is just about the only possible thing that could redeem 2016 at this point, but it's happening!

So I'm pretty pumped.

#123 · 19w, 3d ago · · ·

>>2339756 I just got your message on dA yesterday, and I was so psyched! It would be a dream come true if you did :rainbowwild:

Don't read mine if you value your brain cells

#122 · 19w, 4d ago · · ·

>>2339344 Hey, your face, right back at'cha! We'll see if we can't crank out something wordsy again. Maybe I'll even get around to reading your Life of Sin this time, assuming you can promise me it has a happy ending!

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