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Follow Up on those Buckload of Stories I wrote · 2:35am Oct 18th, 2014

Yeah, following criticisms on my It Started on a Sunday Afternoon, I've decided to revise them all. It's taking Longer than I thought.

Relatedly, after seeing Rainbow Rocks on The Network Formerly Known as "The Hub" today, I must make a comment: I totally called Human World Gummy being a stuffed animal, which you all would have seen if I had posted In an Other World: Rainbow Pie on the Other Side of the Mirror in it's as is state instead of taking the time to revise it

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TIt Started on a Sunday Afternoon
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Pinkie has something she would like to show Rainbow Dash, as well as something to tell her. It dosen't go as planned, Pinkie get's upset, and Dash has to figure out a way to make Pinkie happy again.
Sex
Twilight
Rainbow Dash
Pinkie
Rarity
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Pegasus-skip

Pegasus-skip #10 · Nov 13th, 2013 · · ·

Thanks for your favourite on More Than a Sister

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Me again! Thanks for the Fave of Dear Idiot! I appreciate it!

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I'm glad you enjoyed my little foray into the little world of Spike and Dash. I'm glad that you Faved Every Little Bit, and liked how they contemplated how their lives are similar... and, you know, their kiss!

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Thank you for faving "The Magic Of Colour"

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