Hello I wanted to talk to you reading over a story that I started about a month ago. It's basically a sequel 2 you're safe now. Seeing how you gave me a moment of your time to critique that story I was hoping you could look over this and give me some more pointers or probably tell me what I need to do to make the story better. I thank you for any and all help that you can give.

Hey, thanks for reading Actually, I'm Dead, glad you liked it. Since I'm always interested in my readers' opinions, I would like to know yours too.

Have a Bowie's thumbs up.
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Thanks for the watch, and for the comments on my story. I'm glad you, enjoyed it.

Thank you for your reading and over all support. It's stuff like that keeps me going.

Thanks for the fave on Viva Las Pegasus!