Fluttershy becomes a Dragon! (Season 3 news) · 2:23am Jul 14th, 2012
LAUNCH TEH SHIPS!
I am a student of economics,history and biology. I've come here to produce my seminal work Draconomachi. I hope to complete a and have it edited and posted somewhere it'll get noticed.
LAUNCH TEH SHIPS!
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sings at 1:05
DANCES at 1:18
I just realized that.
That critique I received opened my eyes to the greatest weakness of Draconomachi:
It cannot stand alone.
Think of ALL of the references I've thrown at you in the first few chapters...
references to what!?
There's no sources...
Well that needs to be fixed....
I guess I'm gonna have to start up my preludes earlier than planned.
I shouldn't have expected my readers to take so much in stride.
All in all, get ready for this:
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HOWEVER,
The guy who did it left a sweet critique
Now that his woes are known, they can be remedied!
The story was up their...though only for a moment....
but that proves something.
It proves that it is Within My- no OUR grasp!
We can go big,people!
REAL BIG!
We're gonna have to start taking big steps!
It would seem that Simply re-posting Prologue:Awake alongside Chapter 2:Embarking would be pointless If I didn't fix up chapter 1.
Awake is on the Verge of repost.
Chapter 1 will be going under the knife and
I'm preparing Chapter 2 for a sync up with a side story.
Once that's done, Chapter 2 will be posted in all it's half-baked glory. (to be edited at a later time)
What I am listening to at the moment:
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DRINK ALL THE BOOZE AND WINE! CONSUME UNTO THINE OWN RUIN!
HELLZ YEAH!
MAY OUR NAMES NOT MOURN THEIR VACANCY IN THE BOOK OF THE JUST!
(the lyrics in a nutshell)
This is also the idea of my friends and family who want to steal me away from my computer....
leave me be!
I'm lazy enough as it is!
PM with whatever you want....questions...advice....flirtations
whatever.
I'm going to try and stay on fimfic until I finish this next update.
If you look to the fic now you'll see that Prologue: Awake is gone.
That's because it's down for editing.
Aside form sentence adjustment, I might add more plot elements that will foreshadow future events.
You'll see the prologue's return alongside the addition of Chapter 2.
Two of the side stories are also fast approaching....so I'll have to put work in for them as well...but I'll get these first two things out of the way.