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MonsterHunterBrony


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Twilight has been away from Ponyville for two years. Where was she? She was traveling the world with Spike, of course! She wanted to see what even books couldn't give her, see for herself everything she read about. She is finally returning to Ponyville after this long absence, little does she know about how her beloved town changed while she was gone. Neither did she expect that surprise delivery.


Author's note: I'll be honest, I have no idea if I'll manage to get through with this story, but I have ideas for a couple chapters and I hope I can manage to complete it all. I know the reception will probably be terrible, but I will try to make the story as enjoyable as possible. Don't be afraid to correct me if you see errors, or if you think I could improve a part with something more/less.

Enjoy!

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What is a teacher supposed to do when the newest student turns out to be a little monster? How is she supposed to react when facing intimidation? Only way to find out is to read the story :P

This is something I started working on a few months ago, I only remembered now about it and I worked all night to finish it up. I don't know if you will like it, but whether you do or not, feel free to comment. Tell me what you liked and what you didn't. If you have any suggestions to make it better, go ahead I will read every comments and see what i can do to improve the story.

Also, if you want to become an editor for the story I will gladly accept your help.

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On ponychan's training ground, a thread popped recently proposing a characterization exercise. For the exercise, I asked on the TTG channel who I should pick, and they chose Trixie for me. This is the result of the exercise.

Quoting Ganymede here:
"Here's how this works:

You write a short scene, 500 - 2,000 words, and then we read your scene and tell you how well you wrote that character.

The scene is:

A young filly is crying in the town square.

Write a scene where:

1) Twilight Sparkle happens across the filly during her normal errands.
2) Rainbow Dash sees the filly as she's practicing her stunts.
3) Pinkie Pie comes across the filly as she's doing... whatever it is that Pinkie Pie does.
4) Rarity notices the filly on her way to get more supplies.
5) Fluttershy comforts the filly as she's coming to visit Rarity.
6) Applejack greets the filly as she's coming to setup for the market.

This is a "pick n' choose" list. You don't have to do all of these, and you don't have to write them in any particular order. If there's only one character you think you need work on the most, feel free to only write the scene with that one character.

We're looking for:

1) Dialog
2) Body language
3) Vocabulary
4) Thoughts and internal dialog
5) General approach (how does the character handle the situation?)

There are no rules as to how the scene plays out or how it ends. Just imagine the character in the situation, and play it out exactly as you think it would.

It is HIGHLY SUGGESTED that you put these in a google document, so it doesn't clutter the thread. Also, enable comments.

You may write the scene with a character that is not one of the mane 6, if you wish, although it is recommended that the character have a personality firmly established in cannon. "

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Rainbow Dash gets to pass a day with her idol, Spitfire. During this day she will find out about things she never expected, like the origins of the Wonderbolts and what it means to become part of the team.


This is a story I had in mind for a while now, I don't know if it's any good, i just wrote it because I felt like it. Feel free to give any criticism, this short story is something I can actually rework way more easily than my main project :)

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After a magical mishap from Luna, some creatures from an other world are brought to equestria. Among them, a young hunter, now turned into a pony, will need to adapt to this equine universe and help defeat the monsters from his own world. But to do this he will need help, and the help he seeks may be closer than he expected.Will he be able to go back to his world? Or will he have to live the rest of his life in Equestria? There is only one way to find out.

this is my first fanfic ever, so if there is anything you guys think could be improved don't hesitate to comment. Also since english isn't my first language feel free to point out my grammar mistakes, I try to make the story as good as I can but there is a limit to how many time I can manage to find errors as I proofread it.

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