Alright if you noticed I revoked the submission of my story. My reasoning behind it is that I had to do some further editing that my brother did not catch, nor did I. Another reason was I needed to expand it a little bit more to connect a few things. This story is going to branch off other stories, for example, what happened to the protagonist Cynbel and his family? More questions came to mind by the reviewer and that is perfect. These questions and more can lead up to the next chapter in the

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Hello all. I'm back and I got a whole new story to tell to you. I noticed a lot of my failures with The Final War. I made sure they did not show in this one. I carefully edited everything so that it made sense. Now this story does still jump however it jumps between the chapters for past and present. I may be writing a sequel that deal with the other characters and shows how they intertwine with the events that occur in this series. There are five main characters that will be most talked about.

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