There needs to be clop within the first 500 words, otherwise new readers will hate the material.

I forgot that writing clop was to write something for horny 15 year-old teenagers to masturbate to right away. No longer are we allowed to write some story behind the pairing the in the first place, nor can it be with a canon character and an OC. My bad FiMFiction.

What was Bucket List Goal #1?
1,000 Total Story Views

You guys are great! Thank you so much. It means a lot that people actually like the material that I put out. I'm very happy to write it for y'all. Now lets see if we can finish some more of those goals before I get too old to write. x3

The Old Blog Post

Wow. I just finished re-reading this post and I was amazed that I actually did that in the first place. Losing my near-3000 total story views and accumulative 100,000 words was a hard thing to swallow. Now, however, I've gained many new accomplishments from what I thought was going to be a huge mistake.

List of Good Things

I'm not even going to begin wasting my time trying to fix what isn't broken. Maybe except for the grammar and archaic English (it was my first time using it, what do they expect?). And the story was Written in the Stars.

Reasons for rejection:
-Indents should be tabs, not spaces
-Typos
-OC needs introduction: Dusty, but his presense isn't explained until much later in the story, so it's confusing

Today I wasn't able to put much work towards Chapter 2 of GoH, but I did manage to squeeze out 2000 words for this little gem. I've been wanting to do some Celestia and Luna fics, and I thought this was a good way to start one off. Be on the look out for it later this morning!

In other news, I want to promote a story of a friend that I like to call "Pops".

Yes! I finished notes for the first two episodes to be integrated into chapters for the new story. I've also studied the notes and found what actions for Dusty to take at what time. I'll be starting on the first one tonight if ain't too tired. Hope you guys will like it though. That was 5 hours of analyzing video and audio, as well as transcripts and the MLP Wiki too.

[Click the Image Above to Read the First Chapter!]