Thanks for faving A Ponyville Hearth's Warming. Since everyone else asked... what are your thoughts on what I could do better?

1996181 Well Twilight hasn't forgotten. But she's willing to support her a bit if anything.

Sequel? No promises. I have waaay to many projects to think about this.

Chains are always unpleasant no matter where you put them.

1996102
Hey there!
I indeed liked your story quite a lot but at 3:30am + toothache I really couldn't think of anything nice to write XD
So have some short summary now since you've asked :)
Pros:
+ Liked the characters and the development
+ Rather interesting idea behind the changelings (Sure beats that IDW comics nonsense)
+ Quite atmospheric
+ Good message also IMO
+ Didn't notice any issues with grammar
Cons:
- Prob shouldn't separate speech of the same character in 2 paragraphs. That's kinda confusing.
- Maybe Twi was a bit too fast to put her grunges aside but looking at the one-shot format I guess that's fine really.
Questions:
? Any sequel in mind?
? Wouldn't putting chains through Chryss' leg holes be rather... unpleasant?

Thanks for faving "Friendship lost..." Do you have any feedback to me?

1366822
You are welcome. I liked the way the story is built albeit chapters feel a bit too short :)