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What would happen if Rainbow Dash was injured and Applejack was forced to take her place in the Young Fliers Competition?

The result... is pretty much what you'd expect.

See Applejack journey to gain her wings in time for to compete in the Young Fliers Competition for her friend and realize why she was born an Earth Pony.

A submission for Skeeter The Lurker's Switcheroo Contest!

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Ah, Hearth's Warming. The best time of the year! Just ask anypony on the street and they will tell you how much they love Hearth's Warming. The decorations all over the place, shining in their eyes. Presents all stacked neatly under their tree, begging to be opened. And the overall spirit of the holidays, spreading joy to everypony you would meet.

The day is Hearth's Warming Eve and everypony is gearing up for what is the best holiday of the year!

Well, except one pony. Yes, one pony is not into the holiday spirit. The Critique. Not surprising though. He's kind of an ... well, this is a story for everyone, so I can't call him what he deserves to be called, but let's just say it's starts with an 'a' and rhymes with 'glass mole'.

Heck, even his Computer seems to be in the holiday spirit! And she's a freaking machine! So, why the heck can't he be?! What a jerk!

He's rude, he's a hypocrite, he hated Equestria Girls, and he picks his nose when nopony is looking. Ew...

So, why the heck are we focusing on him? Heck if I know. This story doesn't. If I were reading any story, I'd be reading something like Our Gifts by The Descendant.

Don't waste your time with this character. Seriously, just click on the link and go.

Are you still here? You really want to read this story?

Well, aren't you Mr. (or Mrs.) persistent?

Keep scrolling, I'm sure you'll reach the bottom eventually.

You're not going to stop, are you?

I'm running out of things to say here, so I'll just start saying random things in the hopes that you will go away and read something else.

Monkeys mock mildew more menacingly than most mammals.

Seriously, go read something from TheWraithWriter or from Lunar Metal. I'm sure they've got better stories than this one.

You really want to reach the bottom, don't you?

Pumpkin pie preaches proper punctuation for poor penmanship.

Seriously, guys. There is nothing down here. You are just wasting your time.

I'm serious. Go read something from HudsonHawk or Fedorasarecool.

I'm sure they have some great stories you could read.

How long are you going to keep this up? Seriously?

It was the butler the whole time! That's not cliche, is it?

Okay, you guys deserve a little something since you made it to the end. Okay, I'll let you in on a big secret about the Critique. His real name is

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After a mysterious cloud brings Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie to the unknown land of Leaven, they desperately search for a way home. Fortunately, they happen upon the Harmony Force and their benevolent ruler, Princess Leina. However, as they continue to search for their way home, they soon discover that something within this seemingly peaceful town is threatening to end their lives.

Will they make it home? Or will they be forced to live in Leaven, where something unnatural is sure to occur?

My entry for the Most Dangerous Game Contest

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Princess Celestia and Princess Luna just want to have a day off. So they sneak out of the palace for the simple pleasure of just having a day of fun. However, somepony is out to catch them slacking from their responsibilities. Will Celestia and Luna's day of fun be cut short?

Image belongs to NaZoTh

Also, a big huge thank you goes to Troubleshooter (Formerly Fedorasarecool or something like that). For helping me with the proofreading and editing. He had some great ideas that I think put the story in a very good direction. Show him thanks by clicking on the link and following him.

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Princess Cadence recieves a letter that tells of Shining Armor being in the hospital. Will she see her loved one again?

Big huge thank you to Lunar Avenger and Fedorasarecool for proofreading for me. Thanks again for your help guys. If you haven't checked them out, go check them out.

Also, a thank you goes out to WeepingAngel and the Editors-R-Us group. Thank you for your help on this project. If you haven't checked out the group yet and you're looking for a good proofreader for your work, go check them out. They do good work, they're honest and fair. So give them a chance. I'll put a link up for them. Other than that, enjoy.


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After being gifted with amazing spider-like abilities, Pinkie Pie, now fights crime as the Spectacular Spider-Mare. Defending Manehattan from menaces, like Doctor Octopus, the Kingpin, and more. Meanwhile, she must learn to balance her own life. All while keeping a smile on her face. Which is harder than it looks sometimes.

Spider-Man and all related characters, and location are all owned by Marvel.
Pinkie Pie and all related characters and locations are all owned by Hasbro.

Image courtesy of J-MPN. Please send this artist your support.

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On an outer space adventure, four ponies were hit by powerful cosmic rays. When they crash landed back to Earth, the four were changed in the most fantastic of ways. Time Turner became the elastic Doctor Whooves. Rarity could fade from sight as the Invisible Mare. Fleetfoot became the Equine Torch. And Burnt Oak became the ever lovin' blue eyed Thing.

Together as the Fantastic Four, they will face the greatest threats the world has ever seen. Such as the World Eater, Galactus, their arch-enemy Doctor Doom, and the invasion of the shape-shifting Changelings. Face front, true believer, because here comes the Four.

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The Cutie Mark Crusaders are more determined than ever to earn their Cutie Marks. And when they meet two colts that promise to help them find their Cutie Marks as daredevils, it seems to good to be true. But when they are forced to perform humiliating tasks, they begin to wonder if these colts have their best interest at heart.

Art by: Smlahyee

Special Thanks goes to Fantasia Archsage for proofreading. I highly recommend checking out his work. He's got some great stuff and he's a talented writer and he has a really creative mind. Please help me to say thank you by following him.

This story was feature on The Hot Muffins group by Pedro Handler. First, I'd like to thank him for featuring the story so quickly after establishing this group. Second, if you haven't checked him out, go check it out. The links are right above. If he is reading this right now, I would like to thank him personally and I'd like to thank you guys for reading and giving your thoughts. Take care.

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Rated Teen: Violence, Blood, Brief Language

The world has been ravaged by darkness and chaos. Monsters and demons run amok in the world, destroying everything that every pony holds dear. Unspeakable horrors and malevolent forces gather to shift the balance between order and chaos. Yet there is hope...

Join Princess Celestia as she embarks on a journey to the Lhorse mountains, where she hopes to find enlightenment and atonement. But before her spiritual journey can begin, she must first let go of her painful past and awaken the powerful magic sleeping within her. Empowered as the Sorceress Supreme, Celestia will test her limits against the most terrifying creatures the world has ever known.

Dr. Strange and all respective characters are owned by Marvel.
Princess Celestia and all respective characters are owned by Hasbro.

Big huge thank you goes to Bronyman1995, Flutterguy89, and Aquamarine-Rubie for the use of their OCs.

And to Avenging-Hobbits, Looney Lunar Avenger and The Invincible Iron Brony for being proofreaders on this project. I would appreciate it if you would take a look at their stories and read the work they've done.

Hoofcuffs - Bronyman1995
Redeye - Flutterguy89
Auriaco and Vibrant Note - Aquamarine-Rubie

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Rated T: Language, Violence, Blood

Even within the most gentle of souls, lies a savage beast. For Fluttershy, a young Pegasus, this could not be truer after an accidental dose of gamma radiation alters her body chemistry. Now when Fluttershy becomes angry or outraged, a startling metamorphosis occurs. The creature is driven by rage and pursued by a vindictive general. The creature has caused untold destruction in its uncontrollable wrath. Now, Fluttershy is on the run and alone. And she must remain forever alone until she can find a way to tame the raging spirit that dwells within her.

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