The Games We PlaySomepony is once again masquerading as Mare Do Well, and it's up to Rainbow Dash to figure out who.by AbsoluteAnonymous
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Background Pony"My name's Lyra Heartstrings, but you won't remember anything. Listen to my symphony, for itby shortskirtsandexplosions
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573164 Sorry it took me a while to respond! Long work day, then mobbed by the kids, etc etc. I was left kinda myself by the end of the day.
Sorry on the confusing hostility portion, I actually was trying to tone her down to more of a 'wut' moment at first before getting into the background. (Threw a hint in Derpy's life story that Dash was her worst tormentor, not sure if that was too obscure, though.)
Regardless of my own messups here and there, I'm glad you liked it!
The only thing I can think of would be that there are links to external mature chapters, but I wouldn't think that those would mark the story as having an unread section. If your mature filter is on, maybe turn it off and see if something shows up that wasn't there before? Other than that I'm stumped.
573103 Thank you for a good read. It's an unconventional pairing, but you made it work out well, especially with the changing cutie mark. The character development with Rainbow Dash was also good, though it was confusing at first since she was a little too hostile towards Derpy, even for Rainbow Dash. But having her think about Fluttershy while mistreating Derpy later on was a creative way to get Rainbow Dash to change her mind. Overall, good job!
Also, there's a bit of an error that happened when I favorited your story. When I clicked it, even though I had read everything, it still shows up as though there were a chapter that was unread. Any ideas on what might be doing this?
Thanks for the faves on The Celestia Code and The Luna Cypher!
Hey! Thanks for the favorite!
You wouldn't mind voting it up if you liked it, would you? 
*bighug*
Definitely let me know your thoughts! I love feedback!
573164 Sorry it took me a while to respond! Long work day, then mobbed by the kids, etc etc.
I was left kinda 
myself by the end of the day.
Sorry on the confusing hostility portion, I actually was trying to tone her down to more of a 'wut' moment at first before getting into the background. (Threw a hint in Derpy's life story that Dash was her worst tormentor, not sure if that was too obscure, though.
)
Regardless of my own messups here and there, I'm glad you liked it!
The only thing I can think of would be that there are links to external mature chapters, but I wouldn't think that those would mark the story as having an unread section. If your mature filter is on, maybe turn it off and see if something shows up that wasn't there before? Other than that I'm stumped.
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573103 Thank you for a good read. It's an unconventional pairing, but you made it work out well, especially with the changing cutie mark. The character development with Rainbow Dash was also good, though it was confusing at first since she was a little too hostile towards Derpy, even for Rainbow Dash. But having her think about Fluttershy while mistreating Derpy later on was a creative way to get Rainbow Dash to change her mind. Overall, good job!
Also, there's a bit of an error that happened when I favorited your story. When I clicked it, even though I had read everything, it still shows up as though there were a chapter that was unread. Any ideas on what might be doing this?
Thank you for the favorite on Address Unknown!