It has been bugging me for a while now how Chapter 1 of NMP (gotta change that title if I can think of something better) is, quite frankly, lacking. I'm hoping for a general consensus on what I should do with it and as I am biased I wanted to get my readers' opinions.

So what should I do with Chapter 1? Rewrite it, expand it, or just leave it be? Or some combination thereof? Please, let me know what you think.

Any other suggestions would be greatly welcome as well.