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Random Reviews Set #1 (01/10) · 6:57pm Jun 7th, 2015

Yes, this bunch is already starting out "well" (notice the sarcasm quotation marks):

The Love-foal by lillywrites.

The tags are Comedy (Spoiler: It's going to turn out to be very unfunny), Random (big warning sign there already) and Slice of Life (possibly the only genre tag that is actually relevant).

It is supposed to be a funny little story which Rainbow tells to her friends.

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Err… Do I get you edit some stories as a sideline?

Sure, why not. From what I see most of your stuff is on the shorter side. I might be able to actually finish editing something of that length (procrastination is a bad habit of mine, see comment below). Just shoot me a PM, I guess?

Well, editing for somebody else is an entirely different business than self-editing, which I find exceedingly harder to do. Which might explain why my 2014's NaNoWriMo novel sits at 51k words (unfinished with about 8k still to go; did I mention that I'm a terrible procrastinator?) with not a single word edited. :twilightsheepish:

Still, I might have something to help you. Expect a PM shortly.

Also, I'm still not through, since work got a little busy this week (blasted release days :flutterrage:). Also, I still need to re-read the already revised chapters. :twilightsmile:

The revisions to my story are a lot harder than I anticipated. How do you people do this regularly?! I'm going nuts over this! I wish i kept the original story and just started from scratch a second time around. :raritycry:

I've taken what you said to heart in the first chapter and now that I have gotten to this point I'd like to take a moment to thank you for the review from so long ago. I'm not sure if I ever responded to it so here I am saying thank you and I tried to make my story better based off what you said.
I've tried taking the time to actually think the characters motivations better and I'd like to feel that I've come a long way since the beginning but I'd like you opinion on that, if that's alright with you.
I have this nagging feeling I responded to you before, but my memory is very faulty. :facehoof: So, if I ever did I most likely took the criticism harshly and responded accordingly, for that, if I did, I apologize. Otherwise, I'd greatly appreciate anymore feedback you could give me on my story thus far, seeing as you have it still in your reading library.
Look forward to hearing from you!

Thanks for giving Woundsalt a read!

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