Does anyone want to view what I have of my story?

Here

My story is going to be delayed because my computer is being a bitch to me. Also my family is going through troubles.
I will PM you the story if you want to see it when I am done

I am working on a story for my other account, I am currently 1/3 complete on the chapter, does anyone want to preread it when I am done? This is my first story, so please (If you can) provide constructive comments (If that is okay with you).

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if you want to learn more of me look at tribetwelve

enough said