"Fastest pony in Equestria, eh? Well these are my skies, Miss Dash!"

Enough is Enough!
We've had it with these Mary Sues in our Fan Fiction!

Seriously... I'm very mad about it...
Some could even say I'm...
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[First Person Narrative]
I awoke today, finding the usual hangover besieging my mind. All seemed normal...
Until I found her lying next to me...

Time.
Time is what you need, it is such a prolonged quickness. We need time to heal, we need time to die.
Time will free us from its own prisons. All things are temporary. Even Death.
Prologue
A comedic start for a serious story, if you don't like the prologue I still encourage that you give the other chapters a chance.
Light or Flight
Where the seriousness begins. Scootaloo wakes to find herself in the caverns, trying to figure out what is going on.
In The Dust
Scootaloo explores. Different Perspective introduced.
Perdition
Introduction to the city.
Grieving
Just a side part of the story that shows that her disappearance is affecting others.

[2nd person narrative]
[Twilight is your favorite pony in this]
[This is my first 2nd person narrative ever, I never thought I would attempt one of these ever]
You find yourself in Equestria. And what would a brony do if they found themselves in Equestria?
You go to visit your favorite mane 6 pony, Twilight.
To what do you intend to do with her? Your own wishes.
But Twilight has something else in plan for you.

Twilight has grown up now, she has a family of her own, but she never forgot about her old friend. She finally decides to visit his grave.