I Demand a sequel or continuation of "new six" IMMEDIATLY! Failure to comply with this will result in the disappointment of the gods and myself!

305556 Totally feel you there, my first story was the same way, I made it over the course of several weeks and it was fraught with consistency errors and what not, but I just wanted to be done with it, so I posted it anyway. To be honest it sucked, but if I hadn't posted it, I wouldn't have been able to move on to my new, better stories!

305412 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

I must admit I came up with a rushed ending because I wanted to be done with it. My original intention was to write a story of 1k words, just to try out writing fanfiction, which I haven't done before. I didn't really have a plan, just a general idea, and I hoped an interesting story would emerge as I was writing.

But then I got to 5k and all I was doing was fixing plot holes by changing the story over and over. I also had trouble recalling everything I wrote and I guess I just got afraid of the complexity of a long story

Nice first story! Great concept and I enjoyed how it was done, but the ending was just so abrupt! I was getting all built up for a great adventure! -and then Twilight explodes...?

I liked it and would personally like to see it continued!