Nov
15th
2023
A rewritten story and a rejected one · 10:59pm Nov 15th, 2023
I easily realized that my story 'For the Better or the Worse' had many problems. Grammar problems, vocabulary problems, and continuity problems between different parts. It was quite blatantly an absolute mess, which is a shame since I liked the idea of the story.
So I decided to rewrite it with the help of a proofreader, making it twice as long and, I believe, twenty times better.
For this, I must thank https://www.fimfiction.net/user/338193/TheAncientPolitzanian.
