Like other reviews of mine like this, I won’t be critiquing anything about this story. I’d rather you be as enticed as possible to read a simple Slice of Life I think is worth it, and this isn’t really meant to point out flaws. It’s more meant to pull you partially into an experience, and hopefully convince you to go check it out. I may take issue with something about it, and there may be some grammar errors, but they won’t be pointed out here.

With that out of the way, here we go!

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Pacing is an important issue in writing a story. There are stories that move at a very brisk pace, in order to create a sense of action; The Descendant’s Certain Advantages would fit in this category, as would Sorren’s “Just Another Delivery.” There are stories that move at a leisurely pace to make people relax, like Martian’s “Dance.” Then there are stories that move at a much slower pace, either to help readers appreciate something in-depth, like in shortskirtsandexplosions’s “The Gift,” or

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Is delayed. There was a major plothole I spotted midway typing it. I'm going to be re-writing it, and I'm guesstimating it's going to be Wednesday before it's released. There are three chapters left.

Also, there's going to be a major change: they are not going to Dinky's next chapter. They will be going to the library. Hopefully you guys will be okay with that change.

First things first, because I kinda like seeing big things happen:

So... close... to 1,000 likes.

Anyway, recently I made a riddle, and the people I showed it to seemed to enjoy it, so I'll post it up here for your viewing pleasure. If you attempt it, I wish you the best of luck with it.

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Like the last review like this I did, I won’t be critiquing anything about it. I’d rather you be as enticed as possible to read a simple Slice of Life I think is worth it, and this isn’t really meant to point out flaws. It’s more meant to pull you partially into an experience, and hopefully convince you to go check it out. I may take issue with something about it, and there may be some grammar errors, but they

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It's my birthday today as well. Peregrine Caged and I share the same birthday. I'm 21.

Y'know, in case you're interested. I'll post a new story up soon, I hope!

And that person is Peregrine Caged! Go and wish him a happy birthday!

This blog is mainly a reaction of two things: the rage over Alicorn!Twilight, and the war going on between FimFiction users Sorren and Amit. The latter has blown up quite a bit to include Wanderer D commenting on it. I, personally, don't condone either Amit or Sorren's actions in this matter (Osama bin Laden? WTF?), but I can't make a judgment call on either of them.

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I know this is short, but these are two sad stories that deserve more recognition than they received, in my opinion.

-A Fear of the Dark by IceOfWaterflock
-The Here and Now by 4Darker

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Hey, all! I have a new story up. Wanna see? Then look here!