1304149 My apologies for my confusion and thank you very much for clearing that up.

1303152 Sorry if there was confusion, but grammatically it is correct. I probably could have used "around" or "through" instead of "passed" to avoid confusion. Since I was comparing Celestia to the sun, I don't see a reason to use "sunshine." Plus, the proper conjugation of "shine" is "shines" when a single object is used. Like, "dog runs" instead of "dog run." As for "passing," I figure that for consistency sake and for the language of the writing, "passed" fits better. I hope that clears up that confusion.

1303036 I loved your story and thank you very much I hope you like my story. My apologies for not being clear on the one problem. The problem I referred to was in shadow of the day "Even as the sun shines passed the clouds that block it, so too do you shine passed all that dare to block you?" I most likely not reading it correctly but I felt that some wording was odd to me. I understood it but it felt like it was trying to say
Even as the sunshine passed the clouds that block it, so too do you shine past all that dare to block you?

or was it
Even as the sun shine passed the clouds that block it, so too do you shine passing all that dare to block you?

it did not affect the story at all, it is something I am unclear on.

Thanks a lot for the favorite and review on Lament for a Shadow. It really helps me out. I would like to know what the one problem was as you were not all that clear. I will look over your story as soon as I can and provide a review myself. One thing I will mention is that you can use the link button on top of the comment box. It helps to provide quick access for someone without them having to copy paste the URL. Just makes things easier when you want to send someone somewhere like your story for example.