How are my edits? · 4:17pm April 26th
Hello everyone, so I was wondering how I’m doing with the editing on Hands of Life?
And also what people want in the story.
Stuff I’d be interested in adding
More dialogue and story telling. Different lore here and there. But really make the reader think.
Sexual humor, well our main character is human, there is going to be mistakes made; with just how cute a pony is.
U got this just keep chugging.
thanks for the follow. Hope see more of Hands of Life soon.
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Np man
Thanks for the follow
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Oh thanks, hope you enjoy