Hello all.

I'm certain you're all waiting patiently for my next chapter, but I want you all to know that I am open to suggestions. So if you have any ideas, don't hesitate to throw them my way.

Does anyone have a tvtropes account?

As I wait for my proofreader to respond to me, I've been thinking of what to do for another story. I was thinking about Braeburn and a minor character like Zecora, Fleur, or the Spa Twins.

In the basement of a derelict building in a corner of Manehattan, a collection of ponies were huddled together, listening to Goldstein giving a speech.

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In the basement of a derelict building in a corner of Manehattan, a collection of ponies were huddled together, listening to Goldstein giving a speech.

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"I just can't understand why anyone would rebel against Princess Celestia." Rarity said when they were all assembled back in Twilight's castle, in their meeting room.
"Yeah, things are great!" Rainbow Dash chimed in. "Things have always been great under Celestia! Why are they complaining?"

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Princess Twilight and friends advanced towards the rocky outcrop where Goldstein and two of his bodyguards stood.
"Are you Goldstein, leader of the Brotherhood?" Twilight asked.
"I am." He replied.
Twilight unfurled a scroll.
"*Ahem*. On the order of Princess Celestia, the Brotherhood is to disband and face trial for their rabble-rousing, rioting, and scaring of the public. Those who comply will be treated fairly and justly."

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The crowd massed outside the castle, yelling angrily and bearing signs that read things like 'Down with the Alicorn Master Race!' 'More Princesses=More Tyranny!' 'What Are You Not Telling Us, Celestia?' 'Lives Are Not to Be Used for Tests!' 'A Life in Ignorance is No Life at All!' 'Why Are We Kept in the Dark?' 'Destiny is Not Set in Stone!'

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Twilight goes crazy from realizing that everything had been preordained by destiny, from her friendships to her becoming Celestia's student to her ascension, and kills herself.
Twilight discovers that she was never meant to become a princess; Celestia had been manipulating her destiny from day one so that she'd have a companion to accompany her, having been driven mad by years of watching other ponies die.

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So someone brought up Lauren Faust's claim that she didn't want sexuality and sex in MLP, and pointed out Rarity fawning over guys, Spike having a crush on Rarity, and Mrs. Cake giving off-screen birth are all examples of sexuality. They then began saying how homosexuality is treated like an oddity and heterosexuality as the norm. Here's what was said:

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