• Member Since 1st Jun, 2012
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Altero


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Total Words: 17,441
Estimated Reading: 1 hour

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John and his friends are exploring a mine when everything goes horribly, horribly wrong. After watching his friends die in front of him, John is saved by the newly crowned Twilight Sparkle. Now he must lean to deal with everything he's lost as he strives to fit into a the strange world of Equestria.

This is just a writing exercise for me while some of my other (non ponee) ideas marinate. Specifically, I'm trying to make my descriptions more vivid, show, not tell, and characterization. Probably could work on pacing, too. Any feedback is appreciated.

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In which Princess Luna guides Twilight Sparkle on a short journey, and they discuss many things, such as Luna's fall from grace, the meaning of life, and what comes after.


I had hoped to finish this tonight, for fear of never touching the silly thing again. The mental batteries demand rest however. No promises as to when I'll finish it.

Chapters (7)