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Gotcha.

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So, not very long then. You'll get better, eventually. Do try to ask and follow advice though, if you wanna improve, that is.

2952194
I’ve been writing for about a year now

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Oh, whoops, this is awkward. That was a missclick as I meant to put it in tracking.
The premise is interesting at least, but you oughta put more work into the pacing. Take more time to describe the events, the places and the thoughts of the characters as opposed to mostly writting dialogue. And double check for typos too. You probably don't have much experience writing, do you?

Thanks for the favorite. What did you like most about Starlight and the forgotten empire of monsters?