Okay readers, Yay or Neigh? · 3:04am May 28th, 2014
I'm really struggling here with my fic, third-person POV is just not working for me. I'm honestly better at second-person POV where you know what a character is thinking/feeling.
So here's the deal, I'm considering rewrite in my POV of choice with more detail and attention to plot! I've actually done a sort-of prologue for Chapter 1 to get a feel for it. So far, I like. But do you, the readers, like this new style?