This is the last time I ask this, so I won't bother anyone again (Sorry if I still am, though). What could be the problem or problems with my OC antagonist named Odium? Is it his personality, his backstory, his appearance, his concept, or even his existence in general? Please let me know so that I can fix both him and his story in general.

Thank you and have a great day.

Hey there, everyone. Due to the amount of feedback that I've been getting about both one of my stories and one of my characters and the fact that I've been constantly bothering others about them (And I'm sorry if I still am), I've decided that the best course of action would be to get rid of both of them all together. But first, I need your opinion on whether or not I should do it. If so, what do you think I should do instead? If not, then what can I do better?

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For this part, add +1 point for each "X".
(X) Your OC has more than 2 colors in his/her coat.
( ) Your OC has Bat Wings/Ears.
( ) They have an ethereal/flowing mane
( ) They have sparkles in their design.
( ) Your OC has had his/hers eyes change colors.
(X) Your OC has Slit/Snake/Dragon/Bat Pony Eyes.
( ) Your OC uses a form of dark magic.
( ) Your OC has changed species.
( ) Your OC is an alicorn (+5 pts.)
( ) Your OC contains neon colors.
( ) Your OC has non-canon markings.

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Hey there, everyone.

This is my very first and only time that I get to review something, but I'm both very excited and a little nervous about doing it.

Since there aren't many reviews, if at all, about my favorite movie, Steven Universe: The Movie, or Steven Universe (TV Series) in general, I've decided to give my take on it.

Enjoy.

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Odium losing everything that he had during his journey after the Mane Six and their friends. The fact that he lost his home, his purpose (due to Cozbi tricking him into going against said purpose for years), all of the good deeds that he's done throughout his journey (due to them turning out for the worse after he left), his morality and conscience (Which was the very thing that he was striving for ever since after his birth), and worst of all, possibly his family due to them being nowhere to

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If you want to see what the new chapter is like, here's a link to the story below.

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Hey there, everyone. Sorry to bother you again, but I'm trying to think of a second song for Odium. One that's very deep and emotional and shows his regret and guilt for his own actions and injustices, and his dream of making thinks right, both for his actions and the actions of others, unlike his first song where he wants to put the Mane Six and friends in their place (Side-note: I still haven't figured out how to write great lyrics for that song either). However, I'm having trouble with the

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Sorry to bother you all, but I need to find some good reason for causing Odium's relapse in the story. The reason for this is because I want his character arc to be more harder and more believable and realistic than the show's usual rushed redemption arcs (No offense).

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As the title suggests, what do you think should happen to Odium in the falling action of the story? After everything he tried to do to the Mane Six and their friends and tearfully realizing how ironically villainous and monstrous he's been acting towards them, what do you think he should do?

1. Odium wants to go to Tartarus for eternity as a self-imposed penance for his actions.

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Which of these two choices for you think should happen to Odium that would start the plot of the Rise of Odium?

1. Odium gets knocked out by Twilight during his first fight against the Mane Six.
2. Odium flees after sparing one of the Mane Six, like Fluttershy, out of mercy and high moral standards, vowing to return for justice.