Please give me feedback on this. · 9:37pm Nov 16th, 2021
Hey guys, so I'm going to share with you a
scene from the fanfiction I've been promoting. This scene takes place during the crusader feud I takled about where I asked you to pick a side. It's also ment to show how the fight affects Apple Bloom. Anyways here's the scene, please give me feedback on how it is, and if there's anything wrong with it then please tell me what it is.