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ThePinkedWonder


Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

Jan
25th
2019

Director's cut: A Giant Adventure to Equestria, chapter 17 · 5:13am Jan 25th, 2019

The decision of whether to keep Eric Reed 4 inches tall or return him to a normal, I went back and forth on. I ended up just doing both somewhat by having the size-fixing effect of the counterspell be temporary. This way, the door would be open for me to later write shorter stories or one-shots with him at his normal height, as well as some when he's 4 inches or even smaller.

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Jan
25th
2019

Director's cut: A Giant Adventure to Equestria, chapters 13, 14, 15 · 4:56am Jan 25th, 2019

Because this was the climax of the story, I gave this 3-parter the most thought, well before I got to writing it. However, the only real change from how I first thought the Queen Chrysalis battle might go, to how it ended up, involves Starlight's role. Originally, because Starlight's role in the whole story was going to be much smaller, she wasn't going to be a part of the final battle, and It'll be Eric Reed by himself saving Twilight. But I added Starlight in it for two reasons.

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Jan
22nd
2019

Director's cut: A Giant Adventre to Equestria, chapter 12 · 6:22pm Jan 22nd, 2019

Chapter 12 had no changes at all before and during writing it, and while editing it, outside of fixing grammar mistakes I found. It barely even needed fine-tuning during the editing part.

In fact, out of all the chapters, even chapter 1, chapter 12 had the fewest changes, before and during writing it, and while editing.

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Jan
22nd
2019

Director's cut: A Giant Adventure to Equestria, chapters 9, 10, 11 · 4:50pm Jan 22nd, 2019

Out of all the chapters so far, partly because of how they would originally going to be, to what it is now, chapter 9 took the longest to edit. Only Chapter 15 took longer. Like chapter 8, I thought about naming chapter 9 "Fear of a Princess", but decided not to.

First, the talk Starlight had with Eric wasn't part of chapter 9 at first. She was still going to stay with Eric alone at Fluttershy's, but because Eric himself asked her too.

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Jan
22nd
2019

Director's cut: A Giant Adventure to Equestria, chapters 7 and 8 · 2:51am Jan 22nd, 2019

In chapter 7, Eric Reed was originally going to go to Sugarcube Corner riding on Pinkie Pie, and something would surprise her, forcing her to accidentally throw Eric off her. What would've happened, if I'd kept it, had been similar to what could've happened in the scratched chapter 3 plot, including Twilight saving him at the last second.

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Jan
22nd
2019

Director's cut: A Giant Adventure to Equestria, chapters 4 and 5 · 1:56am Jan 22nd, 2019

I originally wasn't planning to have Starlight almost crush Eric. But because of the scratched plot from chapter 3, I needed something like that to happen to Eric by this point. Since I thought that it could be the perfect way for Starlight to "meet" him, I put it in.

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Jan
22nd
2019

Director's cut: A Giant Adventure to Equestria, Chapters 2 and 3 · 1:27am Jan 22nd, 2019

If you like my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story, and you're curious about anything I either edited out, or changed from what it was gonna be at first, and why, then here you go! However, before reading this, make sure you're read as much as the story as I have out as you're currently reading this, to avoid any spoilers, if you're haven't read enough of it.

Chapter one didn't really change much, outside of some minor changes and fine-tuning, so I'm starting with Chapter 2.

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