The two "in-between" chapters of my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story is finally out!

I updated my "Director's cut" blogs about the 16 chapters already written to what number they now are. A director's cut for the "new" chapter 6 and chapter 17 will be made before too long.

First off, Pinkie Pie was originally in chapter two, and Eric went to her after Applejack's advice failed. However, because of how Eric reacted to Pinkie wanting to help I thought it would be much more fitting for it to happen after the rest of the Mane 6 tried to help him, so I moved her to chapter three.

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Thanks to more input about something else I've been thinking about, in addition to the "new" chapter six of my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story that's in the process of being written, a second "in-between chapter is now also being written for it. The second one would take later in the story between the "current" chapters 14 and 15, and would be about a huge moment that really should've gotten its own chapter. With the "new" chapter six, this second in-between chapter will be chapter 16.

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After heavy thinking and some input from other users, I decided to write what I'm calling an "in-between" chapter for my "A Giant Adventure to Equestria" story, and I've begun to write it. It will be between chapters five and six, and it will be the "new" chapter six, the current chapter six will become chapter seven, and so on, because. From a pacing standpoint, I shouldn't have done the 3-week time skip like I did early in chapter six, and the experience I've gained is allowing me to see that

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This was a funny story idea I came up with to play with Twilight's phobia with quesadillas, and, from a few comments, I might've dropped the ball a little bit in the final chapter of my "Twilight's Bookless Book (Celestia Help Us!!)" so I wanted a do-over of sorts about a story with Twilight's neurotic side. From how the "Don't Go In, Twilight!" story's done up to this point, from a like-dislike ratio, and the number of likes period, it seemed like I did better with this story, if not much

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I was giving heavy thought into moving the Rainbow Dash part into this chapter, and if I did, the Fluttershy part would've been in chapter three. Other than that besides adjusting the scenes to got it like I wanted it, not much else to say about anything I edited.

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My "Sunbutt, Moonbutt, Sparkbutt Sparklebutt, I have Questions" Story is the first one to be featured, but one bit of criticism some have given was how the ending was, with the Princesses wanted to...give friendship lessons, being off or even didn't like it, though others did. I did that partly because I didn't want the story to look like a rant of the show and wanted to end it on a silly note, but it might've backfired a little.

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I got the idea for this story after episode 13 of Season 9 aired in the U.S. but, partly because I was writing two other stories, it took me a while to finish it, even though it was an overall simple one-shot.

Other than making lines better and other "fine-tuning" not much changed from an editing standpoint, so no major cuts or changes happened, unlike a lot of my stories that usually have at least one or two.

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In a comment in my "Too Many Marefriends (And wives) story, when Eric Reed clearly couldn't bring himself to look at ponies in a romantic way I said "Eric probably would look at ponies that way sooner or later", so it was time for him to form a crush on a mare.

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This was one of the hardest chapters for a story I've written up to this point. I had trouble trying to think of what to have Twilight do and keep the chapter from getting out of hand, and is the reason it took about a month to publish it after I published chapter 2: up to this point it was never longer than 2 weeks in-between chapters for my stories. along with all the stories' chapters, chapter 3 of the Twilight freak-out story had the most edits and partial rewrites.

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