Parts of this fanfic validated by the last episode:

- Luna's night guard does guard the palace during night.shift
- Time loops are possible in MLP's universe.
- Ponies look badass in skintight black lycra (okay I made that last one up)

I feel lucky; I've been able to dodge any major incosistencies with the canon episodes and a few of them have actually matched what I had previously written like in this case. We'll see how well it survives into season 3.

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I'm pretty sure 15 will be done on time tomorrow. I'm sorry if you got emails saying 14 was unpublished and republished, that was just me clicking the wrong button somewhere and then correcting it :p

15 will be the end of the story, but there will still be another chapter. It will be fairly short, but I think if you enjoyed the story up til this point you'll want to see the epilogue. I won't consider it 'completed' until the Epilogue is pinned on there.

Thanks for all your support and nice comments as well as ideas and critiques. Also remember to rate it on Equestria Daily too if you rate it here. It always gets more ratings here, but I'd like to see the number of ratings go up there too :p

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I am so very very sorry for the amount of time this was on hiatus :( I really never intended on it to be this long! I have no excuse :p

The good news is that the next chapter is done and now in the hands of my awesome editor, so will be up in less than a week. There are only going to be 15 chapters not including the epilogue, so things will be wrapping up faster than they are unwrapping for these three chapters.

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I just finished final exams for the difficult class I was taking; it was a lot of stress so I haven't really been writing for a while because of the time I was having to put in to study. I'm really sorry for the delay, but intend to begin again now. There aren't that many chapters left, so shouldn't be too long.

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For those who are impatient about the plot resolving, there are only three chapters left and each of those chapters will resolve major plot points. I also promise that Helios will finally explain his evil plan during his next monologue and that reading this story will not raise your taxes.

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I am still working on it, but unfortunately my instructor for my Computer Systems class is a lazy ass and isn't giving anyone any help, which is causing me to have to spend entire days just trying to figure out the material, and it doesn't look like any of my classmates understand either. So yeah, I'll work on story stuff when I can.

And so we start working on the next chapter; there will be 16 in all if you include the epilogue. I am trying hard to make sure this next fight is not confusing as all.

Fun! Can you guess what the Chekhovs Gun will be in the next chapter? If you guess, I'll give you an imaginary cookie! (But won't tell you if you're right until after I publish the chapter).

Sorry, I know this was later than I meant it to be, but these last chapters seem to be harder to write for some reason. I hope everyone approves; next chapter will be hard too since it will involve a lot of ponies in a single scene all fighting at once; I really hope that comes out right :p

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I stayed up til almost 2 am to get it published for you earlier :p Anyway, yeah >.>

I tried to slip in a bit more humor into the mix again; more of that sort of mood whip-lash in the next chapter too.

Anyway, (about) five more chapters to go after this. Sorry about dragging the Pinkie cliff-hanger for so long; I didn't originally intend to but there was a bit more to wrap up before the main heroes arrived back.