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MLPverse1996


Somebody from one of the fly over states trying their hands as a fanfic writer and hoping it goes somewhere.

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  • 34 weeks
    New desciption for my story

    Just got done redoing the description for my story. I was really unhappy with how the bland and short the old description was, and I think it may have contributed to how little attention it's getting, but that parts just speculation. Now if nothing else, the story at least has a description I'm happy with.

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  • 62 weeks
    Progress on Warriors of The Elements of Harmony

    Sorry I have not gotten the second chapter out yet. I was hoping to get it out by last Friday, complications arose and couldn't get any work done on the story last week. But the chapters over half done (not counting editing) and I plan on doing some work on it tonight, so it shouldn't be too long.

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Jun
25th
2019

New desciption for my story · 7:54pm Jun 25th, 2019

Just got done redoing the description for my story. I was really unhappy with how the bland and short the old description was, and I think it may have contributed to how little attention it's getting, but that parts just speculation. Now if nothing else, the story at least has a description I'm happy with.

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2758627
No, if I had thought of an applicable canon character I wouldn't have tried to make an OC - they're less popular and don't come with their own tags and groups.

2758571
Yeah, I got the whole you were thinking of substituting Blueblood for Evergreen part, I just thought that maybe you were planning on using Blueblood from the beginning, but got cold feet and created Evergreen instead. But in any case, I'm looking forward to seeing how this on pans out.

2758570
That's her goal, yes. Not sure how well it'll hold up to all the witness testimony, though - or if Cozy can keep it together under cross-examination.

And the blog post actually makes it clear it was the other way round- I was considering substituting Blueblood for Evergreen, if I din't make him the prosecutor instead.

2758541
Guess so, but Cozy could probably at least convince a jury of ponies not there at the time, that she was just a filly that got in over her head and the reason she tried to flee, was simply her panicking at how out of control things got.
P.S After reading that blog post, I got the distinct feeling Evergreen was originally supposed to be Blueblood and was wandering if that's the case.

2758537
Well having Starlight go to prison wouldn't be very practical, but they still could have handled it better, yes.

And as for Cozy, "nominal sentence followed by probation" is what she'd have got if she was repentant/cooperative, and without being thrown in the dungeon either, See here.

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