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Betless


Somnio habita, etsi non damnose.

Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch'intrate'

Hi.
I'm Betless.
I'm new to writing, but I think I'm decently good at it, given enough time.
But then again, that's up to you to decide.
I hope you enjoy the small amount I've written so far!


Cave Inanilogistam is almost done, but I'm procrastinating getting it finished. Not that it really matters to anyone but me, but I will finish it. Eventually.

I've got a lot of other story ideas, but I'm a 'detail' person, not a 'big picture' one, so fleshing out coherent stories is difficult for me right now. Working on it.


Thanks kindly,
-Betless.

Meus Desiderio
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Thank you for the favorite on Pinning the Heart. I am glad you are enjoying it.

Thanks for the fave! I really appreciate it! <3

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I love breezies! I have waited for breezie fics since their episode and there has been practically nothing! You know the joke of rainbow dash being shipped with everything but the kitchen sink and then also the kitchen sink? WELL SHE HASNT BEEN SHIPPED WITH A BREEZIE. NOT ON THIS SITE.

anyway, thank you so much. And yeah, its obvious, but what was the point of even trying to hide it? You know he's gonna be it the second I describe him cause he's on the frikkin cover :rainbowlaugh:
Also, I think if a romance even has you guessing who are going to end up together, that just means the characters lack chemistry.
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good point actually, do you think they have chemistry? Havent gotten any feedback on that yet? (and if it doesnt, its at least cute, right?)

this feedback really helps me out, so if you've got any other thoughts on the story, please share them. Mistakes can be adressed, egos be stroked this way ^^

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No problem!
I love the world you've built so far, keep it up, although I do have to say the shipping between Twilight and Honeydew is obvious as all getup. But hey, maybe that's what you were going for, in which case, good job.
Great characters too. I'd like it if you explored their backstories and personalities more in the future (but i bet you already have plans).
also breezies! Bold choice. --B

thanls for the fave on To be a Breezie you have an appreciation for cute critters ^^

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