38363Well, I'm prone to spelling errors. And, this takes place before the Nightmare Moon event. So, no Elements of Harmony or Twilight Sparkle. This event takes place about 3 months before Nightmare Moon makes an appearance.

Your story needs a lot of work plot-wise, but other than some embarrassingly elementary spelling mistakes and some spacing problems, it doesnt have much problems. Also, the element bearers only became the element bearers after the nightmare moon thing. before that, they were average ponies.

Fuck anyone who thinks my story is crap.