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TFor a Better Tomorrow - Part 1: The Fallen Crown
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
After Starlight changed the past, Twilight got stuck in the timeline with the war against King Sombra. All of ponykind is holding on, but King Sombra has a few secrets ready to be played.
Alt. Universe
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Main 6
King Sombra
Midnight Coder · 7.1k words · 16 1 · 737 views

Mar

26th

2018

Chapter 2 Update · 7:11pm Mar 26th, 2018

Well, Chapter 2 is finally written. But now comes the time for me to ask for proofreaders. I'm only looking for one or 2 people to look over the chapter and give some basic feedback; dumb grammar mistakes, parts feeling too rushed, stuff like that. Let me know below if you're interested!

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Iroh Legoman #3 · Apr 7th, 2019 · · ·

Thanks for the read and fav on Celestia Robs a bank. It has become my best work. Thanks

Daring Starburst

Daring Starburst #2 · Dec 19th, 2017 · · ·

Thanks for the follow!

Nailah

Nailah #1 · Dec 19th, 2017 · · ·

Thanks for the watch.

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