I read the Chapter 3 of the "Robots are Magic" story and I realized how cringy the actual story itself is. Its really weird how while I was writing it, it sounded good in my head but... it didn't really feel good. Especially the Rainbow gas, I'll change that stuff. The death sequence of it. I was thinking about mustard gas when I thought about it. Well anyway, I hope this story does well when its done!