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Updates! · 3:59am Monday

Alright, I went on an update fest over this weekend. On, FimFiction I just finished a new chapter of Going Home., to reiterate also this week I also updated Displaced Darkness, I also recently started up a new story entitled, The Geas. Also I am working further on

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Thank you very much, I'll be sure to look at your work when I'm able to do so. :twilightsmile:

Fair Enough, I will. Check out some of my stories, as well, tell me what you think, because, as I hope you can tell, I will be doing the same for you. Only fair you get a couple of shots of constructive Criticism in at me as well. I look forward to seeing what else you wrote and to seeing what else you come with.

Thank you, we're trying to constantly improve how me and my co-author tell the story, at times I can understand how it can be a bit much but we try as hard as we can. I do have other works, I'd recommend LoB or DMM, CLC and two of it's prequel fics are going to be rewritten and given an overhaul like DMM got. I hope you enjoy them as much as TS,OM. They are somewhat different to that fic in terms of how I write them.

what got me interested was Two Spells One Mistake. It is kind of a crack fic, that is a fic written filled with references and to see what one can get away with without the readers calling bullshit, while also having a storyline that seems to be leading towards....... something. I find this curious. I think at times a bit more showing then telling can be used but this is something that comes with time and practice. I find myself enjoying the references without being overwhelmed by them, while also being swept up in the story. I have yet to read any of your other works, or even seen if you had any but I am intrigued.

Thank you for the follow, might I inquire as to what interested you? :moustache:

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