PiT may be back in business. Don't hurt me please.

Tal is an abnormal teenage boy, and he spends his days watching My Little Pony and researching everything science-y. When he discovers how to make a portal to different dimensions controlled by his computer, the possibilities are endless! But when a couple of friends come along for the ride, can he keep it hidden from the press and the brony forums, or will he lose his invention to the government?

This is my first fan-fiction, so any and all suggestions, grammar checks, and anything that bugs you about this story are all taken gladly. Please don't hurt me.

EDIT: Changed both descriptions, not really hidden from family. :/