I have a chapter for Accursed completed after some time away. I just want someone to look over it all and offer some criticism. Particularly my grammar and pacing as I feel this is where I'm lacking most. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Things are really rough at the moment and unfortunately I have to go back to California. So I'm currently occupied with the move many other things, my stories will be placed on hiatus until I get myself together.

Hey folks, I'm steadily trying to get back into writing. Its been a rough few weeks along with my prior mental dilemma, I'm also out of a job and I'm trying to get my car back up and running.

So yeah, Chapter 5 is a quarter of the way finished. Also gonna try and make newer (perhaps older) chapters bigger.

Thanks for sticking around, I haven't forgotten about my stories; I normally think about them.

I'm still alive, spent some time in a psych ward and got some help. Thanks for the support and sorry for the scare.

I know you are all waiting for news on the next chapter, and I just had to log in and say it's kind of in limbo. I won't go in-depth because I want to spare all of you the sad details, but prior issues with my mental health have made a resurgence, and I'm currently struggling. I've spent some stashed cash on therapy to see if I can get some help. If not then well, I don't know what.

Thank you all as always.

Stay based

Hello everyone, I have good news. I managed to finish a rough draft of Chapter 5 on Accursed, but I want to try sincerely editing each chapter instead of just posting the rough draft, then making edits. I'm going to try and get the Chapter posted this week, hopefully. Thanks again for your unwavering patience and appreciation of my story.

Sorry about the delay, I just wanted to touch base with you all. I've been super busy with work and home life, enough to where I don't have much time in my day to get a few words down. So I've just been writing every weekend. Just wanted to be transparent.

Still trying to put things together but life is getting somewhat easier now. I managed to get hired at a local Ferrari dealership so that's pretty fucking cool I'd say. Chapter 5 for Accursed is in the works and I plan on doing a rewrite on The Man later. Thanks for the support and stay based.

Got the new Motherboard today and a new monitor to boot, PC's working great like she used too. I'm gonna get back to work on Chapter 4 right now. Thanks for waiting guys.

So bad news folks, my motherboard has officially died. I turned the power button on my pc and the fans cycled for like a few seconds before finally shutting off for good. Now nothing happens when I hit the power button. Luckily Houston has a Microcenter (thank fucking god) but I'll have to scrape some money together for a new one. I'll update when I get another and get right back to writing.

Sorry, for the delay.