I can't make this work. The premise is unworkable.
I can't stress this enough, guys. A dead comment section means a dead CYOA. I can tolerate a dead comment section in the vast majority of cases, but as this is a CYOA, your voices are its lifeblood.
I've been putting this off for far too long.
Romantic sub-plot, ahoy! (JoffLight is now a thing that exists. This fandom deserves to be impaled and roasted on an open pit.)
Good god. It's been over two weeks since we last met our rightful liege in this strange horsie land. I think it's about time to fix that. Definitely by tomorrow.
And yes, Joffrey is going to bitch-slap Celestia. Hijinks will definitely ensue.
I hope you've grown to love Joffrey over the course of this story as much as I have. He deserves your love.
I requested a Rage Review of this story a few weeks back. Here it is.
An overall positive review. To summarize, it's a short and silly story, and that's its charm.
Getting accused of making up words was somewhat confusing, but not all that expected considering how many people here will just pull things out of their rear ends.
Ribbons!
Comments section is dead. CYOA depends on comments section being not dead. Unless a bit of resurrection happens, I'll probably edit the story's perspective to limited third person and choose what Joffrey does myself.
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mrr mrr
muh