This is one of the more exciting parts of HaMaHFHSE.
Starswirl had a golden ball of light surrounding him, and his horn seemed to be a bonfire of brightness. He formed and sent a majestic lance of white into the middle of the cloud of evil, causing it to burst and have to reform. He took that time, to dash over to Spry and Silver as they ran to him as well.
“Starswirl!” Silver Bullet shouted as they neared him, “What the crap is that thing?!”

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*looks at number of "Everyone" rated stories on my favorites and read later and sees many*

Finally, a chapter that's over three thousand words! I'm so excited! Lots will happen, the most prominent being the Third pony revealed. Some less prominent are telling who the crap Spry Canyon is, the beginnings of some tragic shipping, and a prologue to a complicated backstory, which will probably be the entire next chapter, if not more.
In other news, I'm to the point where the plot as far as I've planned it ends, so I'm just winging it right now. I'll have to get on that.

I have the idea for a new story. And by the idea, I mean the first paragraph. This might be a while.
Here it is:
The inside of a pony’s mind can be truly terrifying. What is on the outside, may not be what is on the inside. This is especially true for a unicorn named Bright Dreamer. Let’s take a look and delve into the life - and dreams - of a pony who dreams more terrifyingly brightly in his sleep than when he is awake.

I will make this short and sweet:

1. I made a couple of changes to the prologue. One was adding a fairly important plot point right at the beginning. The other was just fixing some strange wording. (hopefully!)
2. I will be publishing a new chapter just as soon as I get it read over and fix any potential problems. This one will be a bit shorter, by the way.
EDIT: New chapter is out! I hope there aren't any mistakes!