So my brain has kinda been all over the place. There's some other short stories I've been wanting to tap out, so gonna take a small break and write some other stuff this week.

I'm not going to give any context as to where or why this happens, except that it will. King of the Dead will continue for a VERY long time, as I have four books planned.

I walked down the narrow hallway, past every empty cage, except for two. I stop, timidly looking at Luna. She stares directly ahead at her sister’s prison, doing her best to ignore me. I see a shimmer of pain in her eyes: I reflect it right back.

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Originally my schedule was 1 chapter a week, but this next one could be late. I've had issues sleeping as of late due to my wonderful insomnia.
Also the next chapter (13) is going to be a bit longer, which is the other cause for the possible delay. I've been on a writing spree lately, so who knows I might finish it in time.

In the process of advancing the story and making a new villain that's more intelligent and not technically doing anything bad, other than be a total manipulative prick who gets on Raiden's bad side. How will Raiden defeat a foe he can't use his combat skills against? Guess you'll have to keep following the story as it unfolds!

*Spoilers*

So with the war in full gear, I decided to take a chapter, and completely clarify what's going on where, and the location of certain characters you'd expect to intervene . I was originally going to have it be gradually told, but I'm worried the details will be forgotten with all the chaos of what's going on. So this newest chapter spells it all out.

Without giving away spoilers, I need help with a chapter name. This name needs to represent finally being able to show everyone what you're made of in a massive battle. So Operation soandso or Battle for yadayada works as well. Any ideas, drop me a line please!

Ok so instead o pushing out parts, which means massive pages and longer waits for content, I'm just going to post the individual chapters. Unfortunately my computer and mouse are acting up and it occasionally likes to copypaste for no reason without me knowing. So if there's any errors with the chapters, please let me know.

So Chapters 9 and 10 are out and I think you're gonna love it.

I just realized that finding an accurate map of Ponyville has been a pain. In part three, there's a massive fight that breaks out, and I ended up having to wing most of it based on photos from the show.

“Your majesty, I received a letter from you, calling for aid against an Og Nag attack?” She looks confused. I hold out the letter. She takes it and reads it over, “I didn’t send this.” I glance at Emeris, then back to Celestia. “Your highness...who would have a reason to forge a letter from you?” She thinks for a moment and comes up with nothing. I turn to Emeris, “What’s going on? What possible reason would someone have to send us here?” Emeris , “I could see them sending us to an area for an

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So I've hit a big bump as far as King of the Dead goes. I'm detailing a large battle that takes place, and it's chewing up a lot of my time, but it will be the bulk of part 3. I'm trying to keep each chapter to around 15 pages, so you can keep track of where you are in the story with more ease, but I'm not sure if I need to break them down even further. What doe anyone think about a good chapter size? Right now, they sit at about
10k-15k words a chapter. Does 7 sound better?