• Member Since 15th Feb, 2016
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OceanBytez


Husband, Uni student, and amateur author. I write about adventure, dark stories, and lots about cybernetics or similar subjects.

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Sometimes we dream in our rest. Sometimes our dream takes us to our rest.

Submission in Luna ascendant speed write at Quill's and Sofa's.

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Each 'chapter' will be a stand-alone story. The prompt, links to the contest and, other relevant information will be listed in the author's notes of each story. I hope you all enjoy it!

I will include it in all its erroneous glory. no post-editing will be done unless people REALLY insist on it. I prefer to drop in raw speed writes so that new and old authors alike can see what an unedited document looks like. I am by no means perfect. Feel free to play "find the errors" in the comments below!

Thanks for reading- Ocean

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Blazing Comet is your average earth pony. He works as a contractor delivery pony pulling carts teeming with various goods for numerous businesses He has even worked for the Celestial court on a few occasions moving armor and weapons to the various guard posts. Today offered one such contract under the Celestial Court but this one was different. The contract offers a lavish pay to offset the dangers of transporting a new but highly unstable material. Due to the value and countless applications of this material, it is expected that the convoy may be attacked during travel. To ensure the delivery is a success a large patrol is assigned to protect Comet as he transports the material to Canterlot for further research.

Not long after setting off the group is ambushed and Comet is severely injured during the attack.

Disclaimer: My first published story. Potentially erratic update pattern (though it is pretty much a life goal to be a hobbyist writer so at some point I will always return). Please leave comments on things I can improve on. I was not happy with the first chapter but, published it because I need to start somewhere. I am still developing a writing style and it will probably mean this story will suffer from growing pains as I work it out. Thank you for the chance!

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Notable mentions whose material has aided in the development of my writing style and inspired me: anon3mous1, FuzzyVeeVee, canadianbrony91, Kind of Brony, Queen Sanguine Dreams

Thanks to these above I was inspired to write my own story. I used them as a guideline to get a working solution to my own writing style. It may be reminiscent of one or all of them.

Warning: Please note this is one of my first stories. Admittedly, I don't think I am all that good at writing. I do plan on getting better and returning to this story when I can do it justice. For now however be aware that it is not all that great in its current state.

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