i'm not feeling well my teth hurt and i just came from the dentist and my head hurts i won't be doing reviews for a day or so.

this is my review of natural born ponies it had some grammar problems like "baking a launch" and "be Becoming a dad" their should only be becoming a dad no be there it was interesting though the aspect of the main character died and being sent to a hellish limbo place were their was a portal to be brought back alive that was a interesting aspect the opera chapter was kinda meh but it was interesting though. but i thought Alicorns can't die but the part i didn't like was racism to Pegasi oh and

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i'll be reading other stories and talk about them the longer ones take time the shorter ones probably take a few minutes i don't know but i'll try my best and be honest about it if i don't like the story don't get offended

I've been thinking of writing a story a short one have someone edit the bits i have wrong. why i suddenly thinking about writing again I've been reading other users stories it got me thinking maybe i could do a collab with other users they send or email me their story i post it here give them all the credit in i'll be happy idk how long it'll be but i hope it will be long that's if people want to do it that is. tell me what you think about it will you help say yes its okay if you don't.

i love undertale sound track its so good idk i like sans battle them it really good

marry Christmas everybody hope you get good presents in stuff so this is just a little blog i did probably not the final but one so hope you enjoy your marry Christmas.

this is my first time writing i'm not good at grammar and punctuation so please help me along the way i'm trying to get people to help me with the first story i really am confuse about this so i'm gonna just post what i got you guys can fix any problems oh and tell me who edited it so i can thank them i might have the first chapter up tomorrow after school so stay with me.