Well, one last once-over, and Part Three's revisions are ready to be published! So far, I've added close to 600 words to it, mostly focusing on the Pony Joe scene. Once again, it doesn't affect the story's plot lines, but it does make the world that much better and more involved. I also managed to fix an alarming number of typos that managed to sneak past the many reviewers. But that means that I should be able to have a nice, new shiny version out!