1820719 Alright, I'll take a peek at it.

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The Kingdom of "Lore & Tales"

I saw your google + post and decided to give it a look, ive left my ideas in the comments of the story.

The plot has potential tho

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Yes, Meeester is one of our story approvers. He's just doing what's best for the site; you wouldn't want your story to get posted and then have it get ignored or down voted due to technical issues. It is best that you find an editor or pre-reader to help you, as our eyes don't look for our own mistakes. Don't worry about it getting rejected—that happens to all of us, even me. Just use it as an opportunity to grow as an author.

1817336 one of the people have moderatored It, named Meeester, he says that I have messed up, but I fixed it. now I have fixed the problems he said, and now I'm waiting for someone to check it out to see if its good for publishing. I have only got to 9 chapters out of 50. but I want people to read my book even if its not Totally completed

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I'm afraid I'm really busy at the moment, but it is a good idea to get your story checked over by someone else before you submit it. Fortunately, FIMFiction is full of such folks! If you click on this link, it will take you to a list of all the groups who have editors and proofreaders who can help you. You say that you've received a message about it? Do you mean it's already been sent back to you, or do you mean that you have submitted it and that you are waiting for approval?