My newest (Shit) Story is done, need help now fixing it haha. Help?

Hey, i could use an editor/proof reader for my newest story, anyone willing to help?

My mums making me look around the entire house for something that every girl needs once they acc need one and its no where to be seen, then shes going to make me go to school without one even though i have games and need to undress infront of everyone.....
I just want to die

It seems that my account is dead, dms r dead, brain dead...

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Thanks for reading

I MET DANTDM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TWO WEEKS IM GOING TO SEE DAN TDM AHHH FUCKING HELL IM SO EXITED

I get to meet Dan TDM!!! OMGGG