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Unfortunately, I'm not much of an editor or a pre-reader, but I think that it is a very good thing that you are looking for an outside opinion before releasing the story. My suggestion to you would be to find an editor or a pre-reader who can help you grow as a writer and who can help you through your narrative. I know that I never really started to learn until I started using the experience of others to guide me. Fortunately, FIMFiction is full of such folks! If you click on this link, it will take you to a list of all the groups who have editors and proofreaders who can help you. I wish you the best of luck with your writing!

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thanks! hey do you mind if you want to be a pre-reader? if the answer is no just don't reply.

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