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You are most welcome! I hope that you'll jump right in and enjoy the stories and the community here on the site.

1713492 Thank you for the link, I will take a look.

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Unfortunately, I'm not much of an editor or a pre-reader, but I think that it is a very good thing that you are looking for an outside opinion before releasing the story. My suggestion to you would be to find an editor or a pre-reader who can help you grow as a writer and who can help you through your narrative. I know that I never really started to learn until I started using the experience of others to guide me. Fortunately, FIMFiction is full of such folks! If you click on this link, it will take you to a list of all the groups who have editors and proofreaders who can help you. I wish you the best of luck with your story!

1712337 I certainly will. And can you check out the prologue to my mlp fan fiction the life of Nicky The Pegasus to see if there is anything that needs to be fixed, when you have the time?

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You are most welcome! Yeah, I started out on DA, too. This place really is much, much better for MLP fan fiction. I hope that you'll jump right in and enjoy the stories and the community here on the site.