This is a bit late so I’m going to try to take back up the slack but these take a lot of time and effort so we’ll see.

-The chapter opens right where the last left off, with Twilight starring at AJ while her mind is once again fogged by “The thick strands of discordant thought gumming up the works of her brain until it felt as though it had stalled.“

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So here it is, chapter two. Please enjoy.

-The chapter starts off with the symbolism of Twilight trying to walk up hill while being constantly cut by shards of “black snow” that suck away her strength after leaving self sealing cuts while Twilight struggles up toward a light that she has been previously.

-Twilgiht keeps moving forward, despite her perception that the silent darkness around her is giving her “honeyed whispers promised an end to her suffering if she would just surrender.”

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After the last chapter of Asylum came out I started to read it only to find I had forgotten a lot of what had come before and that I wasn’t getting the full experience so I decided I would read each chapter one by one and give a list of events followed by a synopsis/conclusion and maybe give my opinion at the bottom and now I am finally getting around to doing it so without further introduction:

A quick story walkthrough and event synopsis of Asylum: chapter one:

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This chapter is one of my favorites with its balance of perspectives and explorations of questions asked in the first chapter like how does Twilight look and how is her magic. I enjoyed the way it showed Twilight's internal struggle witch really feels like a product of its time and I was happy to return to Ponyville and see what has been going on in the after math of Twilight's presentation with fluid and natural interactions between Rarity, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy.

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The Parasprite recently announced that they would be leaving FimFiction for the time being and leaving their account forever; for more information please read their blog.

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