Twilight's inner monologue during Tanks for the Memories...

Inspired by the Amazing Crying On The Inside by Arwhale and I'm Not Either by the Astonishing PonyWrites

This is my take on what Twilight was going through. I know it's been done, but for some reason, while very well written, I felt there were aspects that were unexplored, and that's why I wrote this!

Both chapters have now been updated and edited. Major thanks goes to Junegold for proofreading and helping out with the editing!

Based on Leo Tolstoy's story called "the old shoe maker", Cobbler, our old Horse-shoe maker meets several ponies who need his help.

For reference, the story takes place before the show starts and during the winter after fluttershy falls from Cloudsdale.

It’s odd how one pony’s decision at a critical moment, can make the world a paradise or plunge it into utter grim-darkness. How the world of Equestria became a mirror of the 40k universe.

Twilight sparkle, gifted with the power of the four gods of Love, Daylight, Night and Magic plunged her world into an eternal war, and herself into an endless spiral of power-lust and insanity.

(This is a rough draft, no where near the final product. This is meant to peak interest from other authors and editors so that i can get help. Also, so that i can get comments from the public. Please comment? thanks!)